tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1915650773744892771.post9106763385187660876..comments2024-03-29T01:41:05.141+00:00Comments on My Poetic Parlance: Crystal Clear....Eileen T O'Neill .....http://www.blogger.com/profile/03325632298717325699noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1915650773744892771.post-75171948099553394132015-02-25T08:27:03.957+00:002015-02-25T08:27:03.957+00:00wonderful poem...emotional effective deeply touchi...wonderful poem...emotional effective deeply touchingAnjum Wasim Darhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01252859337697790445noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1915650773744892771.post-33706225211029171262015-02-21T18:35:20.115+00:002015-02-21T18:35:20.115+00:00I have a dear friend who no longer knows me ... de...I have a dear friend who no longer knows me ... dementia came to her early ...<br />Your poem is sad but wonderfully expressed, Eileen. <br /><br />xxMargiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14433759763753850718noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1915650773744892771.post-33635464162409977262015-02-21T10:55:22.214+00:002015-02-21T10:55:22.214+00:00abandoned from care - This really captures the sad...abandoned from care - This really captures the sad words, but you have captured it with love. alan1704https://www.blogger.com/profile/16068631142963794991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1915650773744892771.post-40668750778236977642015-02-21T03:05:31.217+00:002015-02-21T03:05:31.217+00:00"Her gaze is transparent in its sad emptiness..."Her gaze is transparent in its sad emptiness."....the line captures her ailment and predicament and hits hard...this is one truth no one knows when it befalls...such a poignant write Eileen and so touching...Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1915650773744892771.post-40496986463941131352015-02-20T22:57:47.613+00:002015-02-20T22:57:47.613+00:00This is very beautifully written but also very sad...This is very beautifully written but also very sad and melancholic. Great work as always, Eileen...Optimistic Existentialisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11507986337866049924noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1915650773744892771.post-72446148999518787022015-02-20T21:29:02.658+00:002015-02-20T21:29:02.658+00:00Dementia is such a sad ending for a life, a double...Dementia is such a sad ending for a life, a double loss for her loved ones, as they lose her before the final losing........Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1915650773744892771.post-4566287393502062662015-02-20T20:19:43.105+00:002015-02-20T20:19:43.105+00:00Sadness overtook me by the end, but a sadness so s...Sadness overtook me by the end, but a sadness so still and vacant that I had to go back and read it again. Whether dead or alive, she has left those who remember her and:<br />"Her crystal lamp is abandoned from care,<br />All belongings are deserted from attention.<br />Her perspective is internally facing forever,<br />Her gaze is transparent in its sad emptiness."<br /><br />She may also have left herself. So beautifully written. So painful for those still there. (RIP) Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1915650773744892771.post-4810756117056790812015-02-20T20:10:46.320+00:002015-02-20T20:10:46.320+00:00It's sad when this happens. Made me think of...It's sad when this happens. Made me think of my mother. Myrna R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/15088915165678737118noreply@blogger.com