Planning an escape to the exotic,
A getaway from what is
familiar.
Leaving behind old days of
habit,
Surprise is such an infrequent
caller.
Challenges incite a new excitement,
Faraway cities offer
limelight living.
Suitcases contain
uncharted hopes,
Dressed to impress and be
impressed.
Foreign tongues and tastes
to fathom,
Tick lists of sights to see
and remember.
Rushing freedom into
precious little time,
Pressure eventually points
towards home.
The comfort of one’s own duvet
and pillow,
Routine quells the pangs of
our separation.
©Copyright Eileen T O’Neill 24/11/2013
Your poetry is very nice and I am sorry to hear of your plight. I have had my work stolen too and it is very frustrating. I how you get justice.
ReplyDeleteEileen, I hope it is true that you will be going somewhere exotic, that your suitcases ARE packed. It is always wonderful to experience interesting places, especially if they are VERY different than one's own.
ReplyDeletehey that would be way cool...can i hide in your luggage? ha. i love to travel. find new places. taste new cultures.
ReplyDeleteI can hear the excitement of a trip - "suitcases contain uncharted hopes" - but I'm with you on the homeward turning, and the comforts of one's own duvet and pillow!
ReplyDeleteI loved this Eileen--especially the close--but I too ,love to travel and when I get home again, I ache for the familiar
ReplyDeleteWe need those little trips to reinvigorate the ordinary everyday we take for granted. This was awesome, Eileen. Enjoyed so much!
ReplyDeletebeing a wanderer myself this was very appealing... all the emotions ..anticipation.. the joy... and the tinge of sadness when you must return ...
ReplyDeletemy condition is somewhat like yours...but i love to travel....love your exciting line of 'Suitcases contain uncharted hopes,'.....:)
ReplyDelete"Surprise is such an infrequent caller." Yes to your entire poem. At times, we have to pack up to go visit surprise.
ReplyDeleteIt's fun to be traveling and to experience new things and sights. It's a sojourn enough to give that whiff of fresh air but great then to be back to home again after a while. Have fun Eileen!
ReplyDeleteHank
wonderful! I hope you have the opportunity to go somewhere wonderful
ReplyDeleteYou've captured the feeling,o(r should I say feelings?) so well. The longing and excitment of travel, and then the comfortable feeling of going back home again. Wonderful!
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