At a very particular point
in time,
The evidence is clear to
be seen.
A precise and measured unfolding,
Life presents itself to
the world.
An unravelling and first sighting,
Newness abounds in all its
being.
Rebirth of this newly
found faith,
Another seasonal renewal
emerges.
In realizing that
undeniable elegance,
Spring exudes signage of a
renaissance.
©Copyright Eileen T O’Neill 19/03/2014
Poets United
Midweek Motif ~ Happy Birthday
Dear Eileen
ReplyDeleteI had the most wonderful surprise when I came home today.
Your book arrived.
I shall be reading your poems tonight before I retire for the night.
Spring is my favorite season.
I am always in awe of all the beauty 'that springs up around me'
Love your poem.
Margie
xx
Dear Eileen
ReplyDeleteI had the most wonderful surprise when I came home today.
Your book arrived.
I shall be reading your poems tonight before I retire for the night.
Spring is my favorite season.
I am always in awe of all the beauty 'that springs up around me'
Love your poem.
Margie
xx
Yes, Eileen -- summer is indeed a renaissance. I look forward to this renaissance each year. I love the idea of rebirth you expressed in your poem. So very relevant this time of year as well. Such an optimistic poem. I needed this, Eileen. Thank you!
ReplyDeleteAh, newness at spring! And colors! Beautiful poem!
ReplyDeleteOh, I can't wait for the freshness of Spring. I know it lurks, but, geez I'm impatient this year. Beautifully penned, Eileen.
ReplyDeleteA renaissance and a rebirth. Many are looking forward to changes in spring with every anticipation. Yes, 'another seasonal renewal emerges' Wonderful write Eileen!
ReplyDeleteHank
Your last line says it all. I felt it today - sunshine, beautiful clouds and, tonight, extra daylight and colors streaking the sky....sigh. Bliss!
DeleteSo much unfolding and newness in each couplet here as if your words were coaxing the renaissance of spring! Very fine!
ReplyDeleteits a beautiful thing when spring comes...and life burst forth once again...its as much a renewal for nature as it is for our self....
ReplyDeleteNew life, new birth the wonderful creation celebrated in your words
ReplyDeleteAlways a special moment, that renewal.
ReplyDeletelove the idea of renewal and new birth...
ReplyDeleteYou perfectly captured the essence of spring here Eileen. I hope you have a beautiful day :)
ReplyDeleteLovely I love the use of renaissance wow
ReplyDeleteSpring can feel like coming out of the darkness..always good to read a piece that seems to explain what you can never quite describe!
ReplyDeleteLovely! The last line took this to a whole new level!
ReplyDeleteSo true and beautifully spoken Eileen...love you blog's new look and your new profile picture it is beautiful :-)
ReplyDeleteyes, such wisdom and beauty
ReplyDeleteWishing you the best week ahead.
ReplyDeleteI finished your book and loved every poem.
Next book, please.
Margie
xx
I liked the hope - nice way to finish this Friday. Great flow to this piece too!
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