It’s a concoction of
unknown formula and luck,
Changeable in the array of
fortunes distributed.
Success tastes sweet and warms
one’s confidence,
More rights than wrongs
reassure nervy first steps.
Broken hearts love the
comfort of another embrace,
Hugs are never too many in
the meeting of emotions.
A few words of surprise
say more than a long sermon,
Sincerity seeps through
the eyes and into the soul.
Honesty is nurtured in the
manner of truthfulness,
Spiritual wellbeing
envelops and encourages fervour.
Moments of abject despair
and dwindling enthusiasm,
Gradually heartened by
promise and a touch of magic.
©Copyright Eileen T O’Neill 01/10/2014
Poetry Jam: ‘Magic.’…
It’s a concoction of unknown formula and luck,
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Great opening, rightly so Eileen. One just can't find explanations to all the wonder of magic. Worst off one feels sore being duped. I get that feeling! Great lines!
Hank
So true...it IS 'a concoction of unknown formula and luck' indeed. It is wonderful when it happens though, and often it is so unexpected. I like especially the 'a few words of surprise say more than a long sermon.' You have hit the nail on the head with that, Eileen. Magical in a wonderful way!
ReplyDelete"It’s a concoction of unknown formula and luck,"...absolutely..and also that embrace,a few right steps, honesty and promise may have that magical touch...beautiful...
ReplyDeleteSo true, Eileen!
ReplyDeleteI especially love the touch of magic you write of here, of humans comforting and encouraging other humans. Good one, Eileen.
ReplyDeleteA few words of surprise say more than a long sermon - Great line and i love that it only takes a few words. This works really well.
ReplyDeletehugs...and words of affirmation....both make a connection that will certainly work magic in your life and your esteem...that kinda magic doesnt take much effort...but it does take awareness...
ReplyDeleteI love the magic you described - of love and acceptance and positivity
ReplyDeleteWhat a lovely collections of magic moments, Eileen! And I agree that 'Hugs are never too many in the meeting of emotions'.
ReplyDeleteloved your post, its truly magical
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How true, Eileen... The interaction with other people and the building of meaningful relationships is the true magic of life.
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