Aspects of life held in a
seasonal mooring,
Anchored to another
renewed point in time.
Long-winded stormy days of
lethargic doubt,
Shielded and sheltering
within winter’s warmth.
Optimism takes a look upon
the external views,
An emerging newness
observed beyond confines.
Corners of darkness exude distinct
shades of hope,
Earthy shoots push onwards
to elate solemn moods.
Spring extols its growth
with fresh floral coverings,
Rebirth of attitude invigorates
that isolation of self.
©Copyright Eileen T O’Neill 09/02/2014
a great sense of winter doldrums... but with a sprig of hope from the coming spring... this reflects my state of mind right now...
ReplyDeleteWonderful piece.
ReplyDeleteHere in NH, in the colonies, it's "Cabin Fever" entranced in the dripping of the icicles as a sign of redemption and Spring. :-)
ZQ
nice....that new life bursting forth...i look forward to that spring...in season and in life.....to break free of the frozen...the shadow.
ReplyDeleteI like the idea that even in the darkness hope does emerge. Even in the cold of winter there are shoots waiting to push out. Rebirth indeed happens not only with nature but also with attitude. I like this poem and its message, Eileen.
ReplyDeleteI always feel as though your dictionary as more words in it than mine. You find the perfect mix time after time.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the optimism that spring is indeed round the corner, Eileen! We will be so glad when it is here.
ReplyDeleteI like the hope in the dark corners, and the rebirth of attitude with the coming of spring.........in the western hemisphere I think we are very ready for winter to be over.
ReplyDeleteit's like a theme of the week for us.. inspirational.
ReplyDelete"Optimism takes a look upon the external views" I like the poetic depth you are reaching for and have achieved in this piece - I'll be visiting again for sure... With Best Wishes Scott www.scotthastie.com
ReplyDeleteAspects of life held in a seasonal mooring,
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Classic opening Eileen! There is always something that don't move. It needs little to unravel but cause untold problems if not cleared in the initial stage! Great thoughts!
Hank
Winter as paralyzer! And then finally the rebirth coming just before we've given up all hope!! Winter in the colder climes!!
ReplyDeleteYour last line speaks volumes, Eileen. Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteI needed this today.
ReplyDeleteMade me feel hopeful.
Wonderfully done, thanks Eileen
I yearly await for the shoots to lift my mood. I hate the cold.
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