It snaps its strappy
heels,
Clicks on nervous fingers.
Sings out of time in
tunes,
Dances in pouring rain
fall.
Smiles in lines of love
words,
Slick, sickly romantic
choruses
Tickled pinkish in hearty
laughs,
Emotions ripple from top
to tail.
Reflected in bright loving
eyes,
Nothing else ever really
matters.
Sharing crumbs of
togetherness,
Precious snatches of night
and day.
You and I are simply the
only world,
Other love could never be so
happy.
©Copyright Eileen T O’Neill 17/08/2014
a sweet love - the best kind no matter the type day it is...
ReplyDelete"Sharing crumbs of togetherness,"..defines happiness best..nice lines Eileen :)
ReplyDeleteeven crumbs of togetherness can be enough if the true love is there.
ReplyDeleteIt sounds like the perfect kind of love really. Sounds like there are many wonderful ties that keep the two happy and together in appreciation for what they have.
ReplyDeletebeautifully written and full of love, captivating words
ReplyDeleteWhat a lovely tune, Eileen T O’Neill :-)
ReplyDeleteZQ
This is wonderful and a precious gift really
ReplyDeleteThe last two lines capture well what it feels like to be so in love that we are sure no one else in the world has ever had a love like this!
ReplyDeleteOh this is very heartwarming, lovely, and speaks to the hopeful heart that lives in me. I love happy love stories!
ReplyDelete*Tickled pinkish in hearty laughs*
ReplyDeleteLove that line ...
Lovely poem to the testimony of love ..
Truly lovely, Eileen
Many thanks for the birthday wishes, I had a wonderful day
Take care and be well ...
xxx
Love with finger snaps and heels! Ready to go out and have fun! What a fun personification!
ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderful and beautiful ode to love :)
ReplyDeleteOnce one is with a loved one dear to one's heart nothing matters anymore. But it has to be experienced to believe. Those who do will know. Your write readily says so.Eileen! Wonderful write!
ReplyDeleteHank
Lovely images and sensory details, Eileen... I just love it!
ReplyDeleteThis made me happy. Reminded me of early days of my marriage when romance was so happy. I'm still happy and even after 46 years those moments still return. Hope you're happy too. Loved reading this.
ReplyDeleteA beautiful love like that could only hold happiness in it's embrace. A lovely write Eileen as always. :-)
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