Different dates may recall
many old memories,
Some easily remembered or
just long forgotten.
Affecting individual
mindfulness or the wider world,
Images fade more quickly
now than bleeding hearts.
Immediate impact gradually
retreats into comfort.
The dust settles on the
terror of the deadly actions,
Another zone transforms
the battlefield for attention.
Technology invites
interaction of the world’s audience,
Explosions and ripples of
terror sanitize domestic viewers.
Beware of the garnering of
despots and gathering clouds,
Words of hate quickly mushroom
beyond horizons of hope.
©Copyright Eileen T O’Neill 07/08/2014
Poets United Mid-Week Motif: Hiroshima….
http://poetryblogroll.blogspot.co.uk/2014/08/poets-united-midweek-motif-hiroshima-or.html
I felt this for a bit during the media bombardment of the Vietnam War--a saturation which numbed me to being attentive and empathetic--it may be a survival technique, but neglect and numbing has a high price. Your poem makes that very clear.
ReplyDeleteSo true that different dates trigger old memories & disturb our comfort zone. Whether it be Hiroshima or 9 / 11 /2001 or some other date. The effects still live on long after....sometimes in waves & sometime in ripples. Always good to see you, Eileen.
ReplyDeleteThe last two cautionary lines tell us what penalty we will pay if we retreat into comfort and let "The dust settles on the terror of the deadly actions,".. ...very well written Eileen
ReplyDeleteSo many things trigger our memories. A powerful write Eileen.
ReplyDeleteWe certainly forget the deafening sound of hatred.
ReplyDeleteBeware of despots heavy as dark clouds...yes...indeed..we must always be guardians
ReplyDeleteWell written, and very truthful in what happens to us. You can see the words of hate having built over 14 years of war starting to sprout in new ways. It is so sad.
ReplyDeleteAlso very good use of the key terms for the bomb in the poem. I found it very effective.
Hello Eileen
ReplyDeleteYour poetry I always read a few times as your poetry makes me feel the words you write.
That last line ...
'Words of hate quickly mushroom beyond horizons of hope'
is very powerful ...
Another wonderful writing ...
Thank you.
xx
Beware of the garnering of despots and gathering clouds,
ReplyDeleteWords of hate quickly mushroom beyond horizons of hope.
I like your style Eileen! There is a finality or a punch-line at the ending to bring it to a firm conclusion. Great write!
Hank
Memories, both pleasant and painful, stick with us for all eternity. Beautiful poem Eileen :)
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