Perhaps a passing soul
Dancing heavenly
Upon a rainbow bolt
Of crazy lightening
A clickety clack of heels
While wisps of fandango
Passed floats of stars
Ginger nuts snapped
As flashes of inspiration
Cascaded from above
To simply dazzle
Eyes of twinkles
Gasp in amazement
©Eileen T O’Neill 15/11/2017
Poets United MidWeek
Motif~ Meteor Showers..
Such lovely images, thanks for sharing your poem.
ReplyDeleteIt might be like that, indeed, to be in such a rare scene!
ReplyDeleteLovely poem. I like the thoughts of meteors as "flashes of inspiration". Very nice.
ReplyDeleteI love the idea of the lights as passing souls heading heavenward. Lovely.
ReplyDeleteThis feels like amazement..too many images to connect except by pearling them into words
ReplyDeleteCelestial indeed & for us to 'Gasp in amazement'. It's a beauty Eileen!
ReplyDeleteYour words a delightful celestial treat - yum!
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
To simply dazzle
ReplyDeleteEyes of twinkles
Gasp in amazement
Love the picture you painted here Eileen. There are movements making things alive!
Hank
I love, 'ginger nuts snapped'. Wonderful, dazzling poem.
ReplyDeleteThis is lovely, Eileen! Amazement indeed.
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