A pretty bunch of kisses
Wrapped in promise
Love’s unspoken poem
Every stem a heartbeat
Of perfumed bloom
A still life scene
Pleasing to the eye
Glass tinted roses
A myriad of colours
Their shiny claws of thorn
Prickles of warning
Petals of confetti
A bouquet of smiles
To send and receive
Eileen T O’Neill 22/11/2017
I love your petals of confetti line. That is fantastical to think about. Good day to you Eileen!
ReplyDeleteYou had me from the opening image: "A pretty bunch of kisses
ReplyDeleteWrapped in promise
Love’s unspoken poem" Wow.
I love it! Especially "Every stem a heartbeat of perfumed bloom."
ReplyDeleteWhat Sherry said, I really thought that line was amazing.
DeleteI love, 'petals of confetti.'
ReplyDeleteThank you for this beautifully mindful, compassionate piece.
ReplyDelete“A bouquet of confetti”— I loved this image...so beautiful!! Wow!
A most beautiful rose poem Eileen, receiving with a bouquet of smile :)
ReplyDeleteTheir shiny claws of thorn
ReplyDeletePrickles of warning
Petals of confetti
A bouquet of smiles
To send and receive
Despite the offending 'pricklies', it is still a joy forever. How have you been keeping, Eileen, Ma'am!
Hank
The gift has claws!!! They belie the perfection and promise. Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteI love roses in the garden but not so much cut and put in vases indoors to slowly fade and drop their petals there. No wonder they have claws!
ReplyDeleteAh, even within something so beautiful one can find the occasional thorns to keep us on guard just a bit.
ReplyDelete"Every stem a heartbeat
ReplyDeleteOf perfumed bloom"- Touched!...such a beautiful line! This is a beautiful poem! Thank you. This really gave me the little "pick up" that I've been needing lately, Eileen. :) Wow!
ah the roses and the thorns Yin and Yang
ReplyDeletemuch love...
'A pretty bunch of kisses wrapped in promise. Love’s unspoken poem'.. sigh.. this is gorgeous!
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